Paper 2 draft

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1j4dsSERohpNa4IIoWtM5b8-E4zUpP_G9eqgqtNnaBgU/edit

paper 2 final draft

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1yXYEAccJPnWpr0cuLeubcycIa8JPlykC7qe44Ze7JDI/edit

The first drafts intro was none existent and was in the progress of being made. The body paragraphs are separated and not grammatically correct along with the transfers being not the greatest. The body paragraphs in the final draft are together and is more grammatically correct then the first draft, the transfers between each subject and paragraphs slows better then as well then the first draft. Just like the intro the conclusion is not there it was still in the formation stage of being written.