Peer Review
https://docs.google.com/document/d/1AI8ij4lG47Dia_foMJqZB0JogIG6kHvgtRJd8lJz06A/edit
Overall this paper rough draft was a really good start and baseline for this paper. not very much to add just organization and rewording to different sections. My comments I tried to help them in placement and advising on what I think they should do to better the paper in there final draft.