revision planning oct 18

revision planning oct 18

  1. I think I get some of main idea of most of Gee’s concepts. I believe some are harder than other, but overall the explaining and using of them I think for the most part most of my paragraphs working okay together so far. I think i need a better understanding of some of Haas’ ideas to help me to understand her complicated ideas.
  2. Quote flowing and the background of each task in my paper. I think it’s important to use valuable quotes,because using the wrong quote can break down a paragraph.
  3. I think my biggest struggle is not using enough “I say” then “they say”. I tend to just keep with there appinoin instead of putting my own in.
  4. I believe that science discourse is created through the use of many different ideas put together to make a idea. Using the IMRAD format and others to visualize the observations of study.

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