intro– in the first draft I didn’t have a introduction. I didn’t have any idea what I was going to do for the intro. I added a whole new intro to my paper to give the reader a basis to what it was going to be about.

evidence and explanation–I didn’t add much to the evidence of my paper being that I started on mainly the body paragraphs first. I added very little just a few sentences and rearranged the set up of some of the paragraphs. many things I just combined or took them away or just added onto it so it to make more sense.

reorganization– combined and added some paragraphs. I combined the third paragraph in the first draft to the second one so it would flow better together then it would if it where apart. I also changed the beginning sentence to paragraph two to give a better understanding of Gees example.

new paragraphs– besides adding a intro and conclusion to my final draft I just combined or took away paragraphs. anything I didn’t like in it I changed. but as far as adding a new paragraph, thats all I did.